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SilverFoxZ 
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Posted 19 March 2012 - 12:39 AM
The clips :p
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Ikslorin
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Posted 19 March 2012 - 10:45 AM
I can't tell much about it, without hearing the music for it (music genre changes the style and requirements :) ). But you would need to work on having a transition between the clips, not just fading in and out. Try doing crossfades and masks.
I'll come back later about the music...
I'll come back later about the music...
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thewonderboy
Posted 19 March 2012 - 02:10 PM
I dont like rap but it seemd pretty fitting to the video.
Pretty solid, i dont like too complicated stuff.
Would watch again
Pretty solid, i dont like too complicated stuff.
Would watch again
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#6
Ikslorin
Posted 19 March 2012 - 03:43 PM
I'm not really a person liking the rapping gerne, but I in fact like this song ... had the feeling the text was about hope, didn't really listen but I got in a good mood. Nevertheless the rapping genre (or atleast this particular song) has a problem for frag-movies. You synced it up very well, but the rap didn't give me the feeling of it being synced. If you want to use rap try syncing it to the 4/4, which normally is the last word of every sentence. This way you should get a good sync, but I would suggest taking a genre such as rock, metal, soundtrack ... just everything with a "melody" (no offence :) )
That's about it, it was very clean and simple. Maybe a bit too simple. Work on having a stronger sync, get some transitions between the clips and have a bit more slow-motion.
EDIT: And 00:06 - 00:18 should just be left out
That's about it, it was very clean and simple. Maybe a bit too simple. Work on having a stronger sync, get some transitions between the clips and have a bit more slow-motion.
EDIT: And 00:06 - 00:18 should just be left out
This post has been edited by Ikslorin: 19 March 2012 - 03:46 PM
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m3t4l2
Posted 19 March 2012 - 04:32 PM
Ikslorin, on 19 March 2012 - 03:43 PM, said:
I'm not really a person liking the rapping gerne, but I in fact like this song ... had the feeling the text was about hope, didn't really listen but I got in a good mood. Nevertheless the rapping genre (or atleast this particular song) has a problem for frag-movies. You synced it up very well, but the rap didn't give me the feeling of it being synced. If you want to use rap try syncing it to the 4/4, which normally is the last word of every sentence. This way you should get a good sync, but I would suggest taking a genre such as rock, metal, soundtrack ... just everything with a "melody" (no offence :) )
That's about it, it was very clean and simple. Maybe a bit too simple. Work on having a stronger sync, get some transitions between the clips and have a bit more slow-motion.
EDIT: And 00:06 - 00:18 should just be left out
That's about it, it was very clean and simple. Maybe a bit too simple. Work on having a stronger sync, get some transitions between the clips and have a bit more slow-motion.
EDIT: And 00:06 - 00:18 should just be left out
thanks i will try my best :D
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Posted 21 March 2012 - 05:57 PM
Hay m3t4l2
You have the basic ingredients for a good frag flick but they are not mixed very well based on the result.
The fades are obviously to long which breaks the rhythm but what does stand out is the soundtrack does not match up with the action taking place and the edits were made based on the visual and not the beat.
Here is an example of arguably one of the best frag flicks out there by Tarquin.
The one thing that he does extremely well is edits the visuals he has to the beat of the soundtrack he is using. Every time the beat changes an action occurs that reinforces the visual. dadadadada BOOM dadadadada BOOOOOM
You will also notice that Tarquin also adds the occasional elements that breaks up the action flow when switching from on set to another which gives the viewer a micro break.
Overall a good what I assume is a first attempt and the fact that you were able to even edit and post a frag flick in it’s self is rather impressive. Next attempt listen to what the soundtrack is saying or make a soundtrack that fits the visual and it will be that much better. ;)
You have the basic ingredients for a good frag flick but they are not mixed very well based on the result.
The fades are obviously to long which breaks the rhythm but what does stand out is the soundtrack does not match up with the action taking place and the edits were made based on the visual and not the beat.
Here is an example of arguably one of the best frag flicks out there by Tarquin.
The one thing that he does extremely well is edits the visuals he has to the beat of the soundtrack he is using. Every time the beat changes an action occurs that reinforces the visual. dadadadada BOOM dadadadada BOOOOOM
You will also notice that Tarquin also adds the occasional elements that breaks up the action flow when switching from on set to another which gives the viewer a micro break.
Overall a good what I assume is a first attempt and the fact that you were able to even edit and post a frag flick in it’s self is rather impressive. Next attempt listen to what the soundtrack is saying or make a soundtrack that fits the visual and it will be that much better. ;)
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#9
m3t4l2
Posted 21 March 2012 - 08:46 PM
Frankie V, on 21 March 2012 - 05:57 PM, said:
Hay m3t4l2
You have the basic ingredients for a good frag flick but they are not mixed very well based on the result.
The fades are obviously to long which breaks the rhythm but what does stand out is the soundtrack does not match up with the action taking place and the edits were made based on the visual and not the beat.
Here is an example of arguably one of the best frag flicks out there by Tarquin.
The one thing that he does extremely well is edits the visuals he has to the beat of the soundtrack he is using. Every time the beat changes an action occurs that reinforces the visual. dadadadada BOOM dadadadada BOOOOOM
You will also notice that Tarquin also adds the occasional elements that breaks up the action flow when switching from on set to another which gives the viewer a micro break.
Overall a good what I assume is a first attempt and the fact that you were able to even edit and post a frag flick in it’s self is rather impressive. Next attempt listen to what the soundtrack is saying or make a soundtrack that fits the visual and it will be that much better. ;)
You have the basic ingredients for a good frag flick but they are not mixed very well based on the result.
The fades are obviously to long which breaks the rhythm but what does stand out is the soundtrack does not match up with the action taking place and the edits were made based on the visual and not the beat.
Here is an example of arguably one of the best frag flicks out there by Tarquin.
The one thing that he does extremely well is edits the visuals he has to the beat of the soundtrack he is using. Every time the beat changes an action occurs that reinforces the visual. dadadadada BOOM dadadadada BOOOOOM
You will also notice that Tarquin also adds the occasional elements that breaks up the action flow when switching from on set to another which gives the viewer a micro break.
Overall a good what I assume is a first attempt and the fact that you were able to even edit and post a frag flick in it’s self is rather impressive. Next attempt listen to what the soundtrack is saying or make a soundtrack that fits the visual and it will be that much better. ;)
lol i watched this vid and imho music sucks xD but vid is cool i will take care of your words and ty for reply ^^
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