Posted 16 August 2009 - 11:57 PM
OK I just downloaded and played this map.
Obviously it's too short but it's under development.
It's a very, very easy jump map. That's fine, as there's lots of new jumpers, but still I'd make it slightly more difficult. The ladder/climb complex at the beginning could be made higher and with bigger raises between platforms, as it is you can easily hop and wall-jump to the next level.
I don't get the point of the water section, you just jump in and swim straight down, so what? I think it's a nice idea to incorporate water into a jump map, but there's no invention in your use. I'd drop it or develop it.
I can't work out what's going on at the "end" - but you have ideas for that.
As it is it feels like half of a section of a noob jump map that should have 4-5 more sections with increasing difficulty. It doesn't look terrible, there's worse looking maps out there, but it could do with some character.